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my mind my love my time my life the bloom. my past my past
the rain king - you were right about the stars
each one is a setting sun
moshmont
moshmont
the rain king
red, red, red leaves
on the wet pavement she perceives.
Behind her, unknowingly,
flowers frame her face like glasses.

She walks to classes,
passing fancies,
unaware, like the flowers,
of smouldering glances.

You and your absent attention,
your world stuck in spider-web suspension
see only the color of the sidewalk's leaves
reminding you of a childhood game you'd like to play again.

So in your weightless head
you ask the red rover
to send me running
full speed into your determined arms.

Music: Sufjan Stevens - Holland (despite the title of this poem)

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paulizzlefoshiz From: paulizzlefoshiz Date: August 16th, 2005 03:25 am (UTC) (Link)
I dig it
michema From: michema Date: August 17th, 2005 04:54 am (UTC) (Link)
Lovely, as always. I really like the line "your world stuck in spider-web suspension."

(Typo in the last line, though.)
moshmont From: moshmont Date: August 17th, 2005 05:56 am (UTC) (Link)
thanks and thanks. There was also another typo that I caught earlier on. It said, "the read rover".
redsunrise06 From: redsunrise06 Date: September 15th, 2005 04:24 am (UTC) (Link)
hey josh! it's mary beth...i was a sophomore when u were a senior...in band...
yeah! add me?
pinkzinc From: pinkzinc Date: June 15th, 2006 05:23 am (UTC) (Link)
this is wonderful. i stumbled upon your journal and your words were such an explosion of color, so vivid and warm. thanks for the verbal embrace.
From: unlikely56 Date: June 24th, 2006 01:34 pm (UTC) (Link)
Beautiful and a bit nostalgic.

By the way, you looked surprised by discovering the truth about the stars ;)
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